Your thesis is really stated simply and directly. "Soda is a a poison everyone should avoid." The rest of your essay should be spend on proving that theory. Be ready to include diet soda which contains no sugar, or alter your thesis to say, "Soda containing sugar. . ." You could easily write three body paragraphs or more explaining what the sugar and additives do that link soda to heart disease, diabetes and tooth decay.
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