Here's another poem COME BE WITH ME. Is this any better than the last one I put in here.?

This is beautiful. I'm in a strangely reflective, depressed mood today, and this seems to fit it. Only, unfortunately, I don't really know what I need, just that I need it. The feelings that you've put into this poem are almost tangible, even in the last four stanzas where you detach yourself from your body, becoming whole again in the last two lines where you realize that you need something. Thank you for this.